Park People

[AlanO]

Some pics I took a while back but just got around to printing last night. CC welcome.

5x7 print scans

1

Parked print by Nokinrocks, on Flickr
2

Poser print by Nokinrocks, on Flickr
3

King of Pops print by Nokinrocks, on Flickr
4

flower child print by Nokinrocks, on Flickr

 

[bribrius]

The last one is okay. i think because he is holding the flowers and she is so much smaller in proportion to him. i don't like the bush on the right in the photo but don't think you could crop that out successfully because you would lose too much of the brick, stairs door, it might make it worse. The white on his shirt and on the newspaper box is a little TOO white. Perhaps a way to town that down? The other ones really didn't do much for me.

 

[AlanO]

The last one is okay. i think because he is holding the flowers and she is so much smaller in proportion to him. i don't like the bush on the right in the photo but don't think you could crop that out successfully because you would lose too much of the brick, stairs door, it might make it worse. The white on his shirt and on the newspaper box is a little TOO white. Perhaps a way to town that down? The other ones really didn't do much for me.

Thanks for the critique.

 

[bribrius]

The last one is okay. i think because he is holding the flowers and she is so much smaller in proportion to him. i don't like the bush on the right in the photo but don't think you could crop that out successfully because you would lose too much of the brick, stairs door, it might make it worse. The white on his shirt and on the newspaper box is a little TOO white. Perhaps a way to town that down? The other ones really didn't do much for me.

Thanks for the critique.

welcome. it probably isn't worth much. i almost said the second one because the girl posing reminds me of the statue . But the statue isn't so obvious not sure how many people would catch it. if it was more obvious you would have something there.

 

[AlanO]

The last one is okay. i think because he is holding the flowers and she is so much smaller in proportion to him. i don't like the bush on the right in the photo but don't think you could crop that out successfully because you would lose too much of the brick, stairs door, it might make it worse. The white on his shirt and on the newspaper box is a little TOO white. Perhaps a way to town that down? The other ones really didn't do much for me.

Thanks for the critique.

welcome. it probably isn't worth much. i almost said the second one because the girl posing reminds me of the statue . But the statue isn't so obvious not sure how many people would catch it. if it was more obvious you would have something there.

Yeah, I noticed the statue too, but I decided to keep the 3 steps on the wall instead. There were a few people camera left and making the pic smaller would have brought them into frame. Might look at it again vertical see what it looks like.

 

[charlie76]

Maybe the last...maybe. Composition issues with the rest

 

[AlanO]

Maybe the last...maybe. Composition issues with the rest

Not going to ask for a comp cc on all four but how about # 1. See a crop?

Any better?


Parked Crop by Nokinrocks, on Flickr

 

[AmberAtLoveAndInk]

I really want to like #1 but something is off, think instead of cropping you should rotate the image slightly to the right. straighten out that bench a bit. Number #2 would've been great if the subjects were in focus and again, a straighten is needed I think.

 

[AlanO]

I really want to like #1 but something is off, think instead of cropping you should rotate the image slightly to the right. straighten out that bench a bit. Number #2 would've been great if the subjects were in focus and again, a straighten is needed I think.

Better?


Parked crop 2 print by Nokinrocks, on Flickr

 

[AmberAtLoveAndInk]

I really want to like #1 but something is off, think instead of cropping you should rotate the image slightly to the right. straighten out that bench a bit. Number #2 would've been great if the subjects were in focus and again, a straighten is needed I think.

Better?


Parked crop 2 print by Nokinrocks, on Flickr

yes much better!

 

[AlanO]

I really want to like #1 but something is off, think instead of cropping you should rotate the image slightly to the right. straighten out that bench a bit. Number #2 would've been great if the subjects were in focus and again, a straighten is needed I think.

Better?


Parked crop 2 print by Nokinrocks, on Flickr

yes much better!

I agree... Thanks