part of a fountain. artsy? ish?

[pixmedic4 4]

part of a fountain at a hotel.
played with the exposure on this one for quite while. one minute i would like it darker, and the next minute i would like it lighter. never was able to really make up my mind how i thought i had "envisioned it".....so, i finally got tired of going back and forth with it and left it at what it is now. I thought it looked neat, especially with the one in the background blurred. maybe it needs a little more DOF. or maybe a little less background blur. might go back in the morning and try a few different settings and see what happens. In the meantime, this is what I got.


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[pixmedic4 4]

heres that part from the front.


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[runnah]

I have the sudden urge to pee.

 

[snowbear122 54]

I like the pov on #1, the color on #2.

 

[pixmedic4 4]

I like the pov on #1, the color on #2.

yea, on the first one, i warmed it up and cooled it down so many times trying to find where i REALLY liked it that i finally just got disgusted with the whole process and left it where you see it now.
i don't have near this much trouble with people shots. I can find the happy spot on people photos fairly quickly.

 

[ktan7]

I like the composition of #2.

 

[deeky]

I like the first shot. It may be as is in real life, but I am wanting it to be perfectly vertical.

The straight-on shot doesn't do much for me.

 

[Kazooie]

I'd have given a TON of empty space on the right on the first, and with the coloring of the second.

 

[gregtallica]

I think a little brighter exposure. What about a longer exposure?

 

[cynicaster]

Judging from that fountain’s equipment, I’m guessing it must have been cold out that day.

I like the shallow DoF effect and viewing angle on the first one over the second.

 

[pixmedic4 4]

I wanted to go back and try a few different apertures, but i just didnt have the time. and when i finally HAD a little time, i didnt have the energy or interest.

 

[TimothyJinx]

Yeah, I'm wanting it to be a little more straight too. I would try using an ND filter and getting a longer exposure - could be interesting.

 

[PropilotBW]

If you're looking for artsy, how about defying gravity? What about a 90 or 180* rotate?