Pics of my g/f

[Rilock4]

These are my pictures of my girlfriend while on a trip. I only edited the color, contrast, and sharpened up a little but a little critique is welcomed as I am new and could use some advice. Thank you in advanced!

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[Tbini87]

the first two look the same to me... and don't show enough of her to really make it interesting. the background is also not very interesting or pretty. last one is much better.

 

[burgo]

first 2 are awful to be honest, delete ASAP. The third one is better composed but your focal point seems to be on the cheeks and not the eyes which would have made it better and why are we looking up her nose??.

Taking pictures of someone who doesn't know about it and then posting them on the internet is a copyright issue and pretty dodgy. Mods may have to adjudicate on this one.

 

[Naphtali14]

*cough* >.>

The first two pictures are awful to be honest and there is minuscule difference. The second one's focus is off and the angle isn't quite the best in my opinion. Generally if the angle is looking up the person's nose it isn't the most flattering.

 

[Rilock4]

first 2 are awful to be honest, delete ASAP. The third one is better composed but your focal point seems to be on the cheeks and not the eyes which would have made it better and why are we looking up her nose??.

Taking pictures of someone who doesn't know about it and then posting them on the internet is a copyright issue and pretty dodgy. Mods may have to adjudicate on this one.

Fixed to keep from getting any trouble.

 

[burgo]

these new images are OK if looked at in the context of being holiday snaps etc. As exponents of the art of photography they are not. The third picture is the closest you have to a decent image as the pose is nice but see how that opening on the coliseum is blown out and creating lens flare/overexposing part of her face.

Mate I advise you to begin reading up a few books on basic photography and learn about how yo use your camera better.