Pictures from trip at central park. Any tips?

[ajohnson15]

Would love any opinions or tips or doing things better. Thank You.

 

[Designer]

#7 appears to have better lighting, although the pose is not great. #1 could have been better with more light on your model. Most of these have lighting problems or posing problems. #s 5 & 6 illustrate the difference in lighting or post-production as it is the same pose.

Have a look at some professional photographer's work to see how they pose the model and use light. Then try to emulate it.

 

[iPhoto17]

some of the poses dont look natural at all, lighting could be better in a few

i do like the one before the last the best, she looks more relaxed rather than being angry at having to pose so much