Pin up (Tanya)

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Thought I'd start posting some of my stuff, this is from a pin up calendar I did a few years ago. CC welcome
 

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My reactions were...

- Color and tone are pretty nice.
- Hair seems great.
- Not sure about that dress.
- Flash looked a little overbright... looks like you shot late in the day and overcompensated ... likely with a single light source that was too harsh?
- I see what appears to be ... focus issues? Something looks off.
- Not enough sexiness overall for the pinup thing... Needs more leg I think. Sort of an odd pose as well, she's all collapsed into herself.

So it seems to me you have a lot of good elements, but just didn't QUITE make it.
 
The shot looks more "Bonnie and Clyde depression era" than WWII pinup... partly the pose, the vehicle and the choice of dress.
 
Nice pic

Lotsa' patterns, colors, and noise on clothing are distracting
 

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