Pinup girl style shoot i did other day

[atmsanchez]

I did this shoot last friday i personally am happy with the outcome and so was the client.

 

[rom4n301]

i think that the first and the third are the best, i thought the lighting in the first shot was the best

 

[Pugs]

Number one does it for me! Great shot! It's interesting compositionally... great angle... awesome depth of field from her face to the piller but no further!

There's a little shine on her forehead that I find distracting and the shadow on the piller I find alternately distracting and interesting. The shadow seems to connect her right knee and right breast, which I find distracting. It also continues the diagonal line of her lower leg and completes the triangle-ish shape, which I find compositionally interesting. Overall, though, I think the shadow is more distracting than interesting.

From an exposure point of view, the left bra cup is a bit blown out, but everything else is superbly exposed.

I'm not sure about two and three, but the more I look at it, the more I like four as well!

Great set!

 

[atmsanchez]

thank you guys , and i totally agree number one is my favorite for sure.

 

[GrfxGuru]

#1 for sure, great pose and composition.

 

[scubabear6]

I like 1 and 3. I think 4 would have been nicer with a different crop/shot had the door way at the edge with the more open area to her right, it just feels like she's boxed in. oh yea pretty girl to.

 

[ranmyaku]

Are you ok with people editing your pics?

I thought #1 was good also and have an edit I'd like to show you.

 

[HoboSyke]

1 and 2 are good, 3 and 4 I think the lighting is too harsh..

 

[thierrylord]

The first two pictures are very impressive!

 

[craig]

Excellent job on the art direction. The lighting seems uninspired. What where you going for here?

Love & Bass

 

[atmsanchez]

Are you ok with people editing your pics?

I thought #1 was good also and have an edit I'd like to show you.

go for it

 

[atmsanchez]

Excellent job on the art direction. The lighting seems uninspired. What where you going for here?

Love & Bass

i am playing with the different lighting i just began using off camera flash with the triggers, just need to keep practicing and get better at it, but i was happy with my first attemp.

 

[atmsanchez]

this is one more i meant to show

 

[itsanaddiction]

this is one more i meant to show

I don't find this too pinup - #1 is the best - the lighting as well as her outfit and hair/makeup along w the technical side make it!

 

[ranmyaku]

Here is my edited version:

I thought this looked good. Kind of vintage.