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[his4ever]

I was going for lines here. Is this even interesting at all? Or was this just a good try? Any other thoughts?
1)

I was having a little fun with this one... but still... what could have made it better? I did take some different angles (or at least one other angle... streight on, but it did not seem as neat as this one). Did I crop it too tight? Is this intersting at all? Thanks for your thoughts.
2)

 

[shorty6049]

not even a good try.... haha, kidding, the second one is decent but boring, i like the second one though. i wish that air conditioner wasnt in it though

 

[loser101]

The first one is pretty boring. The second one i feel like is too dark and the building get too close to the end of the picture on the far left.

 

[his4ever]

I began to have the same feelings about the air conditioner as well... figured I would just post these to see what people would say. Thanks so much for your coments.