For a 'rating' I would say 35-40%.
I don't like the cramped central-frame design of the interface.
The pictures are inconsistently sized, post-produced.
Several of them don't seem to be 'portraits'..more like press-photos.
..Having three shots of the handsome blonde-guy when one would do fine.
Pink is a sucky color to showcase the folio.
There are some very nice pictures here but I feel the presentation looks
a bit cheapnis. (I think 16 out of 25 sample pictures are decent examples
but a different approach would sell your services better).
I would drop the baby pictures and the pregnant woman and present the PR-type shots and the portrait/study pictures...simplify and make it more dynamic.
Success with the website!:thumbup: