Portrait Focus - Nailed it?

[quiddity]

Was wondering if focus seems correct/sharp here.
I was using my tokina macro lens with a big aperture. JPEGs str8 from camera no post applied.
Thanks

#1

DSC_0023 by tshesse, on Flickr

#2

DSC_0022 by tshesse, on Flickr

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

Was wondering if focus seems correct/sharp here.
I was using my tokina macro lens with a big aperture. JPEGs str8 from camera no post applied.
Thanks

#1

DSC_0023 by tshesse, on Flickr

I don't disagree that the focus is good...

But, using Gimp I simply did an Auto White Balance and an Auto Color Enhance and I feel it makes it "pop" a bit better....

This is my personal opinion. That's all.

 

[tirediron]

Good focus, and agree Bus' edit does improve the image.

 

[Josh66]

Yeah, I agree - focus looks good to me too.

You're teaching her bad habits early though, with the duck face...