Portrait for C&C please

[Sharfy]

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I had fun as a side photog

The Crazy Daily Experiences: Kikay Pinay
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[DiskoJoe]

One word: Framing.

Your shots are a bit tight and chopping the model in bad ways.

Try not to chop the top of the head or the breast. Also remember if you pan out a little too far you can always crop but if the shot is too tight there is not really anything you can do.

 

[Sharfy]

Yeah i am laughing now at my mistakes LOL..... gonna take that seriously in mind.

 

[Derrel]

Two words: Unconventionally exquisite!

 

[ghache]

the cutting works for me.

 

[DiskoJoe]

Two words: Unconventionally exquisite!

The girl or the photos?

 

[Drake]

One word: Framing.

Your shots are a bit tight and chopping the model in bad ways.

Try not to chop the top of the head or the breast. Also remember if you pan out a little too far you can always crop but if the shot is too tight there is not really anything you can do.

Yup, but other than that, the shots are beautiful, especially the first one.

 

[Sharfy]

Oh Derrel thanks for the comment

 

[Sharfy]

this is just a prove that everyone has their own beautiful eyes but i agree that i got bad framing because i chop the breast of my model at #3 LOL

 

[DiskoJoe]

One word: Framing.

Your shots are a bit tight and chopping the model in bad ways.

Try not to chop the top of the head or the breast. Also remember if you pan out a little too far you can always crop but if the shot is too tight there is not really anything you can do.

Yup, but other than that, the shots are beautiful, especially the first one.

agreed.

 

[Sharfy]

One word: Framing.

Your shots are a bit tight and chopping the model in bad ways.

Try not to chop the top of the head or the breast. Also remember if you pan out a little too far you can always crop but if the shot is too tight there is not really anything you can do.

Yup, but other than that, the shots are beautiful, especially the first one.

Thanks Drake

 

[Trever1t]

+1

:thumbup:

 

[bennielou]

These are FANTASTIC! I love them. Well done! And I'm going to agree with Derrell here.