Portraits with a girl friend

[Restomage]

I think they came out pretty nice, I'm just looking for some C&C so I can improve for next time. I'm kind of restricted by my lighting setup (Using the CLS with built-in flash as commander) so I just did some pretty tight shots. Let me know what you guys think!

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[scubabear6]

I like #3 and #4 the best.

 

[phocus78]

4 and 6 are my favourite..

6 was good too with the sun hitting the ends of the hair.

 

[Big Mike]

Mix in some fill light. In the first two, the un-lit side of her face (and hair) is just too dark.

Also, it's usually more attractive to shoot people from above, rather than below.