promo card C&C please

[y75stingray]

Just wondering what some may think about this image. I was going for an image that could be used on a promotion card, say for a fashion show or club night let me know what you think good bad terrible whatever. You wont hurt my feelings I did this one just for fun!

 

[FransD]

it's a cool photo, but it doesn't looks like a advertisment for a club

 

[reznap]

It's great in a few ways (for what it's intended for).. it gets your attention (lot of skin showing) and it stays impersonal by keeping the eyes shadowed. I'd do some skin smoothing on her face.

I don't know if it would be better to keep her in color or not?

What are the dimensions of the card it would get used on?

 

[y75stingray]

heres a color version as this was just an exercise there isnt any size i need it to be but i suppose i was thinking postcard sized leave behinds and perhaps 16x22 poster size i agree her face needs to be smoothed out a bit

 

[reznap]

Ok cool.. here's what I meant by smoothing:

And here's a layout for a card:

And in black and white:

 

[y75stingray]

Ah I like the extra negitive space with the gradiant I had considered that but thought it may be too much. now seeing it im totally digging it thanks for the post.