C&C per request...
1. This image quality is pretty bad. It looks like a cell phone pic more than it looks like a pic with a D5200. You had a bad sky to begin with, but you either over exposed it at the time of shooting it, or you processed it pretty badly. The grass looks really off. If a shot looks dark, you cant just up the exposure, its more than likely the shadows and highlights that need to be adjusted. If you post the RAW or even the original file and allow editing, I might be able to show you better than explaining it.
2. Not bad. I'd say this is the most successful out of the bunch.
3. This isn't bad either, but it really is not wide enough. Unless you are using at least 2 pics of the kitchen, 1 that is wider, and 1 like this just to show the cabinets/ flat top.
4. You REALLY don't want to use any shots that you can see your reflection in. You need to find another angle for this, or clone yourself out in post processing. NOT a photo worth charging money for.
5. This shot looks too warm and photo looks too cold. I would go somewhere in between.
6. Um...I guess if you HAD to show this small bathroom, then not much you can do.
7. Your lens is not wide enough to show the room size.
8. Not horrible.
9. Horrible. Not sure what happened with this one. Was this a cell phone pic?
I understand that your subject was not much to work with. This is obviously a low end house. However, if you are working your way up, you need to treat every house like a million dollar house, so you can master your technique. That way, when you do get a nicer house, you will be ready.
Keep at it.
By the way, can you afford the Nikon 10-24 DX lens?