Yes, not too bad a photo! I would however, move the watermark to the right hand corner, and crop off some of the worn-down,plain dirt area on the right hand side of the frame. To me, the worn down bare dirt area does not help, it hurts. I grew up around cattle on my grandfather's ranch...it's always good to see a bull identified as a bull, and not as "a cow"!
I prefer the cropped version, although I would have left all of the space above the animals across the top of the frame, and as Rick said, unshackle that bull from the watermark! But I do think the cropped version is stronger, yes.