Red Sox game C&C Appreciated

[levaverypeck]

Hey guys just joined thought id share a little of what ive done. Haven't been shooting for very long but im taking a photo class this semester. These are pictures taken at Fenway and a few random shots around boston. They have not been edited minus a little cropping. Lemme know what you guys think.

#1 DSC_0180 by levaverypeck, on Flickr
f/5.3, 1/640, ISO 400.

#2DSC_0331 by levaverypeck, on Flickr
f/5.6, 1/1250, ISO 400
#3DSC_0323 by levaverypeck, on Flickr
f/5.3, 1/1000, ISO 400
#4DSC_0294 by levaverypeck, on Flickr
f/5.3, 1/60, ISO 800
#5DSC_0425 by levaverypeck, on Flickr
f/4.5, 1/160, ISO 400
#6
DSC_0376 by levaverypeck, on Flickr
f/6.3 1/640, ISO 100

(sorry one more!!)#7DSC_0281 by levaverypeck, on Flickr
f/5.3, 1/2000, ISO 400


Used a nikkon d3100 with all of these. I had seats on the first baseline. All of the pictures were shot using the Nikon 55-300mm lense.

 

[WesternGuy]

You asked for comments, so here are mine FWIW...

#1. Not bad, but background is out of focus and I am not sure what that line is across the middle of the picture.
#2. Nice action shot, but I would crop the top part of the image to get rid of the "shadow line".
#3. Problem here is the range from sunlight to shadows - for me, this is one I would never have taken as these are hard, for me, to deal with in PP. Nevertheless, you did take it and maybe someone else can offer ideas on how to process this one. If it was me, (I use Lightroom), I might try an adjustment brush in the shadow areas to lighten them up a bit.
#4,5 and 6. These do nothing for me and are really just snapshots (my opinion - not everyone will agree).

Anyway that is my 0.02¢.

Cheers,

WesternGuy

 

[levaverypeck]

Thanks for the comments. The bar and "shadow" in the first two pictures are both the same thing its a wire that runs across the park or something. Was hard to avoid it. Just thought id clarify that. But thanks!