"Red Truck"

[enezdez15]

D750
f/6.3
ISO 500
1/125 Sec
24 - 120mm f/4G ED VR
120 mm

Thanks For Looking Any Comments Will Be Appreciated!

Enezdez

 

[tirediron]

I like the scene, but I think you need to get tighter. A LOT tighter; there's too much background for the subject to really make any impact. If you can't get physically closer, or lack the optical reach, even cropping tighter would benefit the image.

 

[enezdez15]

I like the scene, but I think you need to get tighter. A LOT tighter; there's too much background for the subject to really make any impact. If you can't get physically closer, or lack the optical reach, even cropping tighter would benefit the image.

I was looking for like the where is "Waldo" affect ? Maybe, I am being silly I have another picture but in my opinion it is a totally different vibe, here please judge for yourself?

Thanks for taking the time to make a comment & to offer guidance!

Enezdez

 

[tirediron]

Okay, I can see that. Unfortunately I think your first image has the truck a little too prominent for that, and a little too small for anything else. The second one is indeed a very different feel, but in general, I find head or side-on images less appealing. It's hard to beat a good 3/4 profile for vehicles.

 

[crzyfotopeeple]

1st one would be a lot better without the black truck. IMO

 

[enezdez15]

1st one would be a lot better without the black truck. IMO

Yes but out of my control!

Cheers,

Enezdez

 

[crzyfotopeeple]

1st one would be a lot better without the black truck. IMO

Yes but out of my control!

Cheers,

Enezdez

Nope. There's always photoshop.

 

[enezdez15]

1st one would be a lot better without the black truck. IMO

Yes but out of my control!

Cheers,

Enezdez

Nope. There's always photoshop.

You Are Right, But I Want To Become Much More Adept With Lightroom prior to Attempting Photoshop!

 

[KenC]

1st one would be a lot better without the black truck. IMO

Yes but out of my control!

Cheers,

Enezdez

Nope. There's always photoshop.

You Are Right, But I Want To Become Much More Adept With Lightroom prior to Attempting Photoshop!

I like the black truck, but what bothers me is those logs in the lower right. I would take the original and crop the right side just enough to get rid of them and the bottom to eliminate the grass. Then the trucks would be larger and would be framed by the birch on the right, the shrubs in the foreground and the trees on the left.