Requesting some C&C.

[v1c70r]

Hello guys, I just want some opinions on this photo. I am trying to learn Adobe Lightroom.

Thanks, Vic

 

[KenC]

Way too much uninteresting foreground - get up closer - looks like some great subject matter back there!

 

[leixialong]

I think the sky looks a little grainy perhaps from the Editing work. Im not an expert at all as I dont do much editing (I am poor financialy so no Photoshop for me just yet) but when I have edited I have had this before.

 

[Trever1t]

My eyes don't know where to focus.

 

[leixialong]

Also if you look at a Shot I put up (look up my post history) for CC of a skyscraper in Hong Kong you will see I had a similar issue with a blue graduated tint I added in after the shooting of the photo. Made it all a bit grainy.....

See, eugh, a bit grainy huh!!