Retired

[AlanE]

Retired by Nokinrocks, on Flickr

Reshot this after the original post... Here is the new image

First shoot was Fuji 200 Color converted to BW...

OM2N
Zuiko 50MM
TMAX 100 Exp 2001
Shot iso 80
TMAX Dev 1:4 @ 8 Min 68 Degrees


Retired (re-shoot) by Nokinrocks, on Flickr

 

[tirediron]

I rather like the subject-matter here, but I wish it were leveled.

 

[AlanE]

Tirediron - I like the subject too... I shot this using fuji color and converted to bw... I wasn't thrilled with the level horizon but I'm not quite satisfied with this either... This is one I might reshoot from a few angles on a good bw film. Thanks for the comment....

 

[AlanE]

Reshot image... Added to 1st comment.

 

[timor]

I am looking at it and looking...The idea has some logic however the building is too dominant, maybe "final retirement" would better describe what I feel. (Maybe too nasty.) On technical side if that the best scan you can get I think your camera is overexposing. Both shots have blocked highlights.

 

[AlanE]

"final retirement" would better describe what I feel. (Maybe too nasty.)

LOL... I'll live... Thanks for the CC.

 

[gsgary]

Tirediron - I like the subject too... I shot this using fuji color and converted to bw... I wasn't thrilled with the level horizon but I'm not quite satisfied with this either... This is one I might reshoot from a few angles on a good bw film. Thanks for the comment....

Ilford PanF ?

 

[AlanE]

Tirediron - I like the subject too... I shot this using fuji color and converted to bw... I wasn't thrilled with the level horizon but I'm not quite satisfied with this either... This is one I might reshoot from a few angles on a good bw film. Thanks for the comment....

Ilford PanF ?

GSGARY, Were you suggesting I shoot this using Ilford? or was that a question?

 

[gsgary]

GSGARY, Were you suggesting I shoot this using Ilford? or was that a question?

Just wondering which film you would use for re-shoot

 

[AlanE]

I like the Ilford 125 FP Plus, but if I shot this again I might try some TMY, I want it contrasty with some grain. Next time I won't shoot at noon, maybe I can get a better exposure.