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Digging through the archives since I can't do any shooting right now. This is from only a little while after I got the camera... After a bit of work, I don't think it's too bad, really. I'd like your thoughts:

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Like the picture (the color and the repetition really works), but I'm not so sure if the white labels should stay. Hmmm, did you try a cropped version?





pascal
 
You may want to decrease the depth of field so only one book stay in the focus, isolating it from the rest. I think that effect would have greater impact visually.

Interesting picture nevertheless.
 
Agree about the DOF however I don't feel that any book is really all that sharp. If you look at the green little text below the title, it looks like the second green text in, is the sharpest book. And it seems soft. Maybe it's the compression.
 

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