Right Outside My Window

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Just took these today. Please C&C thanks :)

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1st one does nothing for me. The second one is pretty nice though. It is pretty centered in composition though. A little different crop could really help that shot out. If you cropped so that the blossom was in the top left corner of the shot I think it would be a little more interesting.
 
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I cropped it and edited it a little, I hope this is what you meant.

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haha Im about to post the same plant as #2. Nice photo's.
 

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I cropped it and edited it a little, I hope this is what you meant.
I would have cropped it differently...the flowers on the right are distracting.

And the image looks over processed now...too bright and washed out.
 

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I'd say #2 looks real nice. Very shallow DoF.

I would have cropped it differently...the flowers on the right are distracting.

And the image looks over processed now...too bright and washed out.

Yeah the petals look really bright now too.
 

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