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Theo2

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I just got a Rokinon 14mm f/2.8 lens yesterday and I wanted to test it out today! I don't have a whole lot of experience with UWA lenses, so let me know what you think! I hope to get better with it over the next few months.



Rusted by crustyhippy24, on Flickr
 
I don't know, the positioning of the car in the frame makes me think of a car that is moving and not derelict as this one seems to be. The clouds off the back bumper of the car end up catching my eye almost more than the car does. The shot looks like you can't decide whether the car or the clouds are the subject. I wouldn't know what to expect out of the lens to give feed back on that though.
 
love rusted cars
 
The car's framed a little bit tight by the foot of the frame I'd say, but I do like the picture. I think it needed about half-the-diameter-of-the-wheel separation between the tire and the edge of the frame, and that could have been lost from the clouds overhead as shown, without it diminishing the overall appeal of the shot.
 

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