Same shoot, same girl, different setting... C&C please...

[michael9000000]

Here's the same beautiful 16 year old girl from a previous post, with a different setting and style...

 

[jwbryson1]

I think her face lacks contrast and I'm also not a big fan of the tight crop.

I also think this is a bit too cool. Maybe up the red tones a bit.

 

[The_Traveler]

face is too OOF and bland (in color)

 

[jwbryson1]

FWIW, this is a quick and dirty 5 minute edit of what I would do. Just my $0.02. YMMV.

Original

http:// Girl16 original by jwbryson1, on Flickr


Revised

http:// Girl16 Revised by jwbryson1, on Flickr