Hard to tell, now that we know the flipped version so much better ... :scratch: ... if it weren't for the writing, no one would ever notice it was flipped, but with the letters...
And this makes me think back to my pic of the green bucket (no one remembers that but I do) which followed the direction of your flipped version, i.e. leading the eye from the left to the right, in the way we write, and I thought that was good, and many then said I better flip it around and have the eye travel the pic from right to left (as does your original version) ... and I flipped it to see and it felt so wrong.
Is there a right or wrong, I wonder?