Second Try, C&C Please? :)

[Catastrophic]

:sillysmi:

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Mine eyes!!!!

Thats really bright. Over exposed and flat looking. Needs more contrast in the ruffles. As it stands now, the textural quality of the flower matches the background and just kinda blends.

 

[Samanax]

Looks out of focus too...or suffering from camera shake.