Fun shot. I think you nailed the focus on the eye. The texture on the hat adds a nice interesting second element. The only thing I'm not crazy about is the composition. The right side is just too dark for me, it doesn't add to the shot. I would try to lighten that side up on the next shot or crop it closer to the nose. Keep shooting!! Glad you had fun w/ this! That's what it's all about!!
Its a great profile pic...much better than others you see...I happen to like the understated look of this photo...thank you for sharing this with us...