Self Portrait Version 2

[cosmonaut]

I would like your thoughts on this self portrait. I tried to give it an abstract look. Comments or suggestions welcome.
Cosmo

 

[Tyson]

What is that in the back ground?

I think your focus was off a bit.

 

[LaFoto]

Nice reflection-in-the-river self portrait this one is .
I once made one of myself setting on the wooden bridge, too. It is fun.

At least that is how I interpret the method here.
Nice ... not ideal to get to know you, though . And there's quite a bit of headroom that I tend to study a lot more closely than your silhouette.

 

[cosmonaut]

Thanks Tyson and LaFoto, Spot on knowing what it is. My reflection in a shallow creek.
Cosmo

 

[Parago]

I would also suggest cropping it differently. Additionally I turned the greens up a notch. How do you like it?

 

[cosmonaut]

Thanks Parago, I like that crop as well. Not so much negative space.
Cosmo