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Hi there, nice focus for self portrait..

why don't u let the photo show in the thread instead of the link.. u can read about how u do that somewhere in the tpf home page..
the harsh flash made that shadow behind u which is i am not a fan of .. :)

best of luck
 
You will get a lot more comments if you post the picture in the thread, instead of a link.
 
To be direct and answer your question, I think the background is off-putting. Not all of it. From a different angle, with only one of the walls showing, this could be a better composition.
 
Is the background very off-putting?
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This makes things a little easier...
 
Big flash shadow behind you? Looks like it...
 
1. Cluttered background
2. Direct pop up flash
3. Centered subject
4. Deer in headlights
5. Distracting light to the left of your head
6. Large speck of dust on your sensor that is accentuated through use of a small aperture.

I could go on, but you probably just shot it that way on purpose.
 
1. Cluttered background
2. Direct pop up flash
3. Centered subject
4. Deer in headlights
5. Distracting light to the left of your head
6. Large speck of dust on your sensor that is accentuated through use of a small aperture.

I could go on, but you probably just shot it that way on purpose.

<3
 
Yeah it's terrible and Tyler, get a life you sad sad man.
 

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