honoryourlife
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- #16
I used a Canon 5DII, Canon 24-70mm f/2.8, Polarizer Filter and a Canon 580EXII Speedlite. (I was too lazy to bother with my lighting).
cool set! I think the lighting matches the mood you wanted... but you could have done better, and you know it! lol! Too Lazy.. what kind of excuse is that, man!![]()
I won't be so lazy next time.
[No one told me anything, I just forget about it. That's all.
Its not really a huge deal, the photos still look alright with it on.
Maybe I'll take it off, or maybe I'll keep it on.
Who knows, who cares.
Well, if you don't, then why are you even seeking critique? In this case, the CPF did NOT add anything productive to the photos????????[/QUOTE]
I was asking what was thought of the set, not for critique on the photos.
I liked the pose in number three. Maybe a couple shots from the perspective of the cocaine? I thought your models were pretty, but they did not look "high" after the "cocaine".... Overall I liked them.![]()
Good idea, thank you!
On the first run through, I didn't even notice that the girl was doing "cocaine". This is due to the very inadequate lighting. I know you say "I was too lazy to set up my lights", but because of that, your message was literally lost in the darkness in some of your shots. The CPL only exacerbated the underexposure. You also said "The photos look alright with [the CPL] on", which is your opinion, and apparently not held by the other posters.
In shot #4, I can barely tell what she's holding. Is it an axe? It might as well be a broom, because the axe head blends in with the underexposure.
It almost looks like you used pop-up flash on these due to the harsh shadows behind the subjects.
I'm not at all sure what's going on in #3.
The missing patches on the wall, and the cups should probably be the least of your worries. I'd work on the fundamentals of exposure, and composition prior to fine tuning your scenes.
If you wanted C&C, you should at least have the mindset to not refute everything everyone critiques.
But I guess since you "got the effect you wanted" it doesn't matter what other, more experienced members may have to say.
Thank you for your criticism, remember this was just a practice shoot to see how the photos would turn out. Just a PRACTICE one.
I appreciate what everyone had to say, don't assume I didn't.
Looks like another case of "i went ahead and bought really expensive gear so please tell me how good my crappy pictures are." Haven't seen one on here in ages!
I buy what I can afford, I would rather not waste my money on something less versatile.
