I guess I'll take a shot at it Amanda....
I really like your idea but I think it would work better if it had a little more black above the headstock. (it's cut off)
Other than that little detail maybe a different font... so it fills the bottom frame.
I like it though!
I'm not a big fan of the framing in the first one. I don't like all that white space. The photos themselves are all nice. I like the second and third ones the most.