Shirlyn and Richard

Vtec44 · Jan 23, 2015

This was shot at f1.6 in the middle of a sunny day.

Just for fun, can you find the 3rd person in this picture?

DavidVote · Jan 23, 2015

While I like the idea, it feels like there is wayyyy too much fore ground/white space in this picture. The couple looks tucked away in the corner, while I know that they are the main subject, my eyes can't help but wonder throughout the image at nothingness. The natural borders you made with the grass is too much.

Critism is all subjective and opinionated of course.

Braineack · Jan 23, 2015

I like the composition. I'd just like to see more contrast on the couple to draw them out...

squirrels · Jan 23, 2015

I love it. If you are looking for nits, the oval shaped break in branches on the left side pulls me away a little. And now that you mentioned to 3rd person, I can't unsee it. I'd be tempted to clone those, but either way I totally adore it.

SquarePeg · Jan 23, 2015

I think I'd like this more if the foreground was not so bright, especially that big blob of blur bottom right. Very distracting from the main subject.