Shoot at the Train Station

[twocolor]

Here's my latest family shoot. The pictures were taken at a local train museum.

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3. Just realized I cut off her toe - DANG IT!

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5. Not loving her hand placement here . . .

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8.

please feel free to give constructive critique!!!

 

[Big Mike]

Nice set. The one thing that I would want to be different, would be to have the children looking at the camera/viewer in shots 2 & 3. It looks like they are looking off-camera...probably at the mother. Again in #6, the little girl is looking away.

I think it works in the last one, as they are both looking well off camera and in the same direction.

 

[visualpoetry]

Nice work! What a great location. My favorites 1-3.

 

[tirediron]

Agree with Big Mike's comments on the eyes, additionally, the little girl's disembodied fingers around the back of her mother's neck (#6) bother me a little, however other than that, great work!