Shoot For a Friend

[bace]

So this is one of the first shoots I did with new strobes. C&C welcome.

p.s. (I had no control over clothing make-up and hair which sucked because this was not the look i had in mind for her)

Also my ps'ing was a bit different in each pic.

 

[tirediron]

Nice; I might drop a 1/3 - 1/2 stop on your key light and add a reflector image right just to reduce the deep shadow around her left eye/cheek, but good captures nonetheless.

 

[notelliot]

I would brighten up her eyes a bit in the first three, and do a little skin retouching in all 4. her arms are cut off in awkward places in the first 2, otherwise good work.