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Tbini87

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Hey guys,
recently did a shoot with some sisters who wanted to give the photos to their parents as a Christmas present. We were really excited and had a great time doing the shoot. We tried to mix using ambient light, reflectors and flash. The sun went down a lot faster than we expected forcing us to work quickly but overall thought it was a success. Here are a few shots. C&Cs welcome and appreciated.

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Is the first shot super soft? I may have uploaded the wrong image (thought I weeded out the soft images but maybe this one slipped through).
 
I will add this one instead then... but will leave the first one up to get comments anyways.

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First one is out of fcous.
2 and 3 stand out .
good work.
 
Ok first picture is going in the trash. Missed it somehow. Thanks.
 
Its still a good shot. maybe some sharpening before considering to trash it.
 
don't trash #1 just yet! It's a supa cute picture, even though it is a little out of focus! Try a little sharpening and editing before you completely pitch it out! they look SOOoooo relaxed and natural in it that I'm thinking they will like it and want prints even though it may be a out of focus.

#2 is STUNNING. The only thing I might change is a tad tighter crop. But the lighting is simply amazing!

#3 same as #2. BEAUTIFUL!

#4 this one doesn't catch my attention as much but it's still a nice picture.

#5 LOVE it! Such a good idea.

overall, you did a super great job and these prints will be a treasured Christmas gift! Congratulations!
 
They are very, very nice. I am sure that the parents will be so happy to have them.
 
The first three are very nice. The rest... well not so much.

As for the first view, I'll agree it's a bit soft, but absolutely acceptable for 8x10 and smaller. I might crop this one up from the bottom quite a bit... up to the bottom of CRAZY PINK logo. The knees of the girl in back are not helping the composition.

The lighting is just too flat in 4, and 5 is a near miss for me... a bit too staged and silly.

But I do like that first one. Very nice!

-Pete
 
#5 is cute but sadly it cannot be cropped to some of the most popular sizes without losing part of the image.
 
That is true, and an excellent ad on, if you stand to make money from the framing.
 
#5 is cute but sadly it cannot be cropped to some of the most popular sizes without losing part of the image.

It can be changed to move the two closer by taking out a portion of the middle to change the look. It can be done in Elements.
 

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