Goonies, thanks for the opinions. Out of the first 3, the only one I did more than some curves to was #3 (added vignette and converted to BW). What about the first two look over-edited? It's obvious i did more work on 4 and 5 though lol. I'm just interested in what you see in the first two that would be processed artsy. Thanks.
To be honest, the 3rd one is what really jumped out at me in that manner, and actually is my favorite shot of them all if the composition was just a little different and less effect. I think it is the best illustration of the storms effect given the playground as the subject matter. The first two, were more issues with composition ( especially the second one ) but they still looked lacking for some reason which I thought was from intentional editing but perhaps they didn't have enough editing? The exposures seem a little off and the WB in the first one could be a little off ( hard to tell on this screen ) but I assumed this was just tweaking everything in post. Many people seem to feel that EVERY pic needs something different added or tweaked instead of just a simple crisp image with good contrast and WB. My main gripe with the 2nd one is that its just too tight. It needs some more context. As it stands it just confuses you as to what the crap is on the ground other than the traffic barrel. I should have been more clear and thorough but I was in a hurry. apologies. Also, to be fair, I wouldn't have used this focal length for the first and third shots, but you were strictly stuck with that for the lens test, so for what you did capture; not bad.
For the record, lately I have been looking at a lot of documentary type stuff like Pete Souza's work, soo maybe I am just on too much of a "purity" kick right now.:lmao: