Slip and slide action shot (7/4/08)

[Mr. Vapor]

 

[wrbphotograhy]

I don't find the image as a whole pleasing. Car, Roof, Tree, and maybe even the girls in the top right are distracting. I think closer, more to the side of the boy would have looked better.

Otherwise it looks like fun!

 

[icassell]

I agree. Exposure is good, but composition is wanting. Try cropping everything out that's above the grass level.