Morgan:
I think that these border on being great. I would like to see them in black and white- the blue tint, though subtle, to me, takes away from what would be a classic pose. Stark White and Ebony Black, to me, would give a timeless quality to the images.
These must be difficult shots to manage on your own, but from a strictly picky point of view, I wish you had someone who could adjust for the unfortunate shadows - the one on your cheek in the first one and the shadow across your upper calf in the same picture. Also someone to fix your hair ( the loose strand in the first picture after you were in position). Your left foot looks quite uncomfortable, almost crappy, and your hand holding it is awkward. I would rather have seen it some what looser.
To my eye the second picture is the better one in terms of composition and position. It looks more comfortable even though it is more like a death case. It reminds me of photographs I have seem from the twenties and thirties. With the eyes open and a Mona Lisa smile it would be a very sexy pinup type of pose. Again there are shadows that bother me. The one on your left chest looks like a bruise, and extends across your chest to a lessor extent. Also your right hand looks like you dipped it in purple ink. Your left knee casts a shadow on your right leg that would look better if it weren't so prominent. I know you can't see these things while en pointe so to speak. And that is why you need an assistant.
You are much too vibrant and vivacious to do the pallor of death too often.
Just my 11/2 cents for all it is worth.
Judge Sharpe