Some Class Assignment Shots

[Snakeguy101]

I am taking my first ever formal photography class now and our first assignment was motion so I grabbed a few pics tonight and will be getting some more tomorrow. Not my best work but it is so different from any of my other shots that I am still proud of them. I am open for C&C before I show them to the class.

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[fsquare]

Love them.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

I like #2 the most, but I would crop it square, and take the scrap off the right side.

A square crop will mimic the end of the hall (pattern/shape repeat).
You might also want make sure the doorways are straight.

 

[Snakeguy101]

I like #2 the most, but I would crop it square, and take the scrap off the right side.

A square crop will mimic the end of the hall (pattern/shape repeat).
You might also want make sure the doorways are straight.

Im not really allowed to to PS them yet so I have to leave the scrap there but I will crop it a bit more and straighten it some. Thanks.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Scrap=the extra you crop off.

 

[Snakeguy101]

Sorry I thought you were talking about the piece of paper in the hallway. In that case then yes I will do that and thank you again.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Oh, I didnt even realize that was there, so at least to me, it wasn't distracting. I don't know that it needs cloned out.

See what others say, and how you feel about it. *shrugs*


There's lots to like about that shot.
I love the cool hue in the foreground, many different kinds of lines lead you to the back warm "exit".

 

[Undo]

Nice shots. #3 is my fav.

 

[Snakeguy101]

thank you. I think I like that one the most too.

 

[kasperjd4]

Yeah I'd agree #2 is the strongest. You should be able to photoshop out that peice of paper on the ground quite easily if you desire. And straighten the horizon to make everything level.