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Went to the Dominicain recently and here are a few pics from the trip.

I have more that I'll post a different day.

Look forward to the critiques!

#1

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[/URL] Chair BW by lee.demers, on Flickr[/IMG]

#2 Same shot but in colour

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[/URL] Chair Colour by lee.demers, on Flickr[/IMG]

#3

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[/URL] DSCN5186 by lee.demers, on Flickr[/IMG]

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the DR is great for color photos! especially in the campo's. all the houses are very brightly colored, but with so much character.

can't wait till my next trip.

where were these taken? i go down about 4 times a year. my fiancee is from santo domingo.


i really like #1 because my daughter and i are just getting into photography, and starting with B&W film. so i'm drawn to it. but, #2 and #3 remind me of my home away from home with the bright colors. in the first shot, my eyes are drawn to the seat of the chair. but for some reason, in the second, i would think my eyes would be drawn to the bright splotch of yellow.. instead, they are drawn immediately to the lizard. i think subcontiously i looked and hoped he wouldn't get pinched when someone sits down.

thanks !
 
I would like the framing of 1 better if the chair wasnt cut off. Easy fix would of been portrait orientation to emphasize both lizard and chair.
Second shot looks like a tourist snapshot ..
 
POST SOME MORE!
 
I LOVE the detail in the B & W. Great photos!
 
the DR is great for color photos! especially in the campo's. all the houses are very brightly colored, but with so much character.

can't wait till my next trip.

where were these taken? i go down about 4 times a year. my fiancee is from santo domingo.


i really like #1 because my daughter and i are just getting into photography, and starting with B&W film. so i'm drawn to it. but, #2 and #3 remind me of my home away from home with the bright colors. in the first shot, my eyes are drawn to the seat of the chair. but for some reason, in the second, i would think my eyes would be drawn to the bright splotch of yellow.. instead, they are drawn immediately to the lizard. i think subcontiously i looked and hoped he wouldn't get pinched when someone sits down.

thanks !

Thanks for the like!

These were taken in Las Terrenas. I totally agree with you for the colours and caracter. Lot's of interesting places to check out. We only left the resort for one afternoon so we were pretty limited time wise.

The shot for the lizard was really hard to get as he was moving really quickly and wouldn't stay in one spot for very long at all. I got lucky with this one that he was actually looking at the camera, but as Rotanimod mentioned, it would have been nice to capture the whole chair, would have made this picture a lot better. There's always next time ;). Going to Hawaii in February and I'm getting a T3i for Christmas this year :) Can't wait to use it.

Glad you like them trisha0409!

Here's one more that came out good or at least worth posting on here anyways lol

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[/URL] Hallway by lee.demers, on Flickr[/IMG]
 
I was just in Punta Cana for my Honeymoon! Very cool and different there! I wouldn't mind going back soon :D
 
14 trips, i've been all over the island, and taken probably 4 or 5 thousand pics...

all with my hundred dollar point & shoot... none worthy of even being my desktop background :(
 
Well as they say practice makes perfect ;)

Just keep shooting, I know I am. You'll get it sooner or later and I hope I do too lol
 
I'm going in Jan, there has to be more stuff to photograph than that... Didn't get any markets or odd ball stuff.
 
shootermcgavin said:
I'm going in Jan, there has to be more stuff to photograph than that... Didn't get any markets or odd ball stuff.

There definitely was but I wasn't really thinking this much about photography then. I've always like it but since I saw this one photograph it's gotten me really intrigued and want to actually get into it. I've left my creative side go for log enough and thought this would be a good outlet.
Getting a T3i for Christmas and really looking forward to diving in.
 
I'm going in Jan, there has to be more stuff to photograph than that... Didn't get any markets or odd ball stuff.

there is a ton to shoot everywhere.. but depending on where you are headed, will determine some of the best places..

if you'll be on the northcoast, virtually anywhere in the campos of puerta plata. the streets of sosua are nothing but shops. the beach will give you some great shots, with mount isabel in the distance. the shop and bars on the beach, will not give you much more than touristy shots, unless you're shooting people.

central... downtown santiago is amazing. the monument in the center of town will give some really great pics. albeit slightly touristy.

las terranas and la vega will get you some really nice campo pics.

zona colonial in santo domingo though... now there are some nice shots... it's the first city in the new world. the first street, the first church, the first hospital, monestary. many buildings are falling apart, but many are still in use. columbus's brothers "castle" is still in use. and of course, you have the old city walls.

punta cana... eh, beautiful beaches. but i avoid that place like the plague. too many ai's and tourists :)
 
It is great that all of you have visited the DR, but remember why these photos were posted. The photographer wanted C&C. Whether you like or dislike the images is not relevant, but rather your reasons why. So, here goes with thoughts on the composition of the images and what I see in the photos.
First, what is the subject? In the first I see a chair, lizard, rotting post, a background with lines...in the colored version a bright yellow background with jagged lines. I assume your main subject is the chair because that is the most prominent and largest subject. So, how do the rest of the elements relate to the chair. Do the other elements in the photo draw our attention to the chair or away from it? How about that lizard? How important is it? I believe it draws our attention away from the chair, but it is it important for us to see it? We can recognize what it is, but we cannot see much detail. Does it deserve our attention or is it just distracting us away from looking at that chair.

What about the background? How important is it? Yes, it is colorful, but do we really need to see it or is is just there because it is just what was in the background. The wiggling line is interesting and might warrant a photo by itself, but what does it add to the chair. Notice how part of it is hitting the chair? If you want it there it would help add to the depth of the photo is it were not touching the chair, but had some space. But, I would suggest that the background is not important because it pulls our attention away from the chair and for what reason. A solution would be to have used a wider (smaller numbered f/stop) aperture which would have blurred the background still keeping it color, but not pulling our attention away from the chair.
The chair itself has a lot of positive things going for and I can see why it caught your eye. I see interesting patterns in the seat, I see interesting textures in the rockers, the wood. The post helps emphasize that the chair is not new has been used which adds to its charm.

In short this is an image of a chair, so let us see an image of a chair. Omit or lessen objects in your photo that are not related to the chair that keep us looking at the chair. If you want a picture of a chair, let it be a picture of a chair....not a lizzard or a background of other items that do not belong even thought they might be there!

I think one of the reasons this works better as a B&W is because the bright yellow takes away from , the softer textures and unpainted character of the chair. A duller background would be more appropriate.

The tienda photo has great color, but agin you were trying to get it all in. What made you take the picture? Could you have chosen something within that scene gotten closer to it and highlighted even more the story you were trying to tell. For example, is it important for us to see so much of the street in the foreground? If there is writing on signs, we would like to be able to clearly read it. look at all the color in just one of the buildings? Do we need to see all of the buildings to understand why you took the shot?
What about the background? the trees and sky are sort of washed out, are they needed. I would like to see more of those flowers, less of the fence. How about that pink building and what about that person? She/he looks interesting, but we can barely see what he/she is wearing?

The old adage "Less is More" might apply to both your images.

BTW I spent two years with the Peace Corps in the DR ('66-'68) and JFK had a rocker from the DR.
 

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