Some feedback please

[smiley82]

I took these photos of my little cousin on my first attempt to try some potraits. I would love to have feedback, if anyone has any to offer! Thanks you guys!

 

[juno444444]

I like the first three but I think the subject doesn't fit the frame enough. Number 4, the setup makes her stomach look a bit bulging, I think more than real life. Number 5, smile a little fake. Also, did you focus on the eyes in these pictures? Seems a bit blurry but I am not sure if it is just me. Overall they are nice shots and I think could be even a lot better with a few minor improvements.

 

[smiley82]

Thanks for all the feedback. I know they seem a bit blurry. They seemed to do that when I scanned them over. I didn't even notice her stomach until you pointed it out. Thanks so much again.