You have posted 18 images here, unnumbered. You cannot expect folks to comment on that many, particularly, being unnumbered they are very hard to refer to. If you figure it could take about 2+ minutes to "comment on each image, then you are expecting folks to spend 36+ minutes reviewing your photos. In my humble opinion, I am afraid that is not going to happen, particularly when about 7 of them seem to be repetitions.
You are better off picking 3 to 4 images that you really like, numbering them as you post them, and tell us why you like them, or not.
I am sorry if this seems a little harsh, but this is the reality of asking for feedback on so many images.
WesternGuy