Some Pictures I took Today

ZachH

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comment and critique appreciated
 
#1: good bw, but is too crooked
#3: a more tight shot could be more interesting, but i appreciate the subject.
#4: very nice :thumbup:
 
1. This is a very nice shot, but it needs to be straightened just a bit. It tilts to the right. The focus, composition and contrast are all good.

2. I like the colors in this and for some reason find the shot interesting. I'm not sure what it is I'm looking at though. Perhaps thats why I find it interesting. Is this part of a mural? Grafitti?

3. The sky is blown out & the top of the machine on the left is cut off. I don't find this shot to be very interesting.

4. Very busy and I'm not sure what the point of interest is supposed to be.
 

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