Some recent photos. CC welcome

just1morefotomamma

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1. my goddaughters feet.
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2. my crusifix, like the way the light was hitting it and the angle.
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3.Railroad from my scenic trip
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4. B&W rose
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5. last one i promise ;) my daughter, not posed at all shes just a ham
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CC is welcome.. all comments welcome.. thanks for looking
~kim
 
1 - Nice concept but out of focus.

2 - I like it, but would like to at least see all of his hand if not all of the crucifix. Also, there are spots on the background that could be cleaned up (pre or post) for a really pro look.

3 – Not for me???

4 - Well done. My only nit would be to get either all or none of that bud on the left center.

5 - Cute! Will be an excellent memory.

btw - Really don't like the water marks.

TF
 
#1 is too blurry but i really like the soft focus on #5- its a great portrait, but it would have been even better if you could see her other ponytail
 
I think #4 is interesting, but could stand a contrast boost to give it more detail. I also think it could be composed in a more compelling fashion. I do think you did a good job with the soft background and shadow.

I agree that five is a great capture, but would benefit from the inclusion of the other ponytail. I know how hard it can be on those candids though.

I have to agree with OldClicker that the watermarks get pretty distracting in some of these.
 

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