Some Wedding Photos

[MohaimenK]

I've been busy on the side editing my last wedding I did. Here's a sneak peak of it. I am wondering if the top right picture is a little too dark compared to the other two? At my home computer (calibrated monitors) they look great. Work monitor (all jacked up) looks a little bright. My last wedding prints came out perfect compared to my edits viewed on my monitor. Perhaps I might calibrate one of the 2 monitors for web view and one for post processing.

Edit, this is a test mock up so I will take out the blemish off her arm and on his face

 

[vtf]

From my "Nonprofessional" eye I think the photos on the left look fine, But!!!! I am assuming thats the bride on the right, not sure, can't see the face so what my eyes lock onto is the other camera-man taking your picture. I'm not fond of the picture on the right in general, sorry.

 

[MohaimenK]

From my "Nonprofessional" eye I think the photos on the left look fine, But!!!! I am assuming thats the bride on the right, not sure, can't see the face so what my eyes lock onto is the other camera-man taking your picture. I'm not fond of the picture on the right in general, sorry.

Thanks VTF. Once I'm finished and put up the entire series then it'll make more sense. I have shot of her face also. Once the storybook is done, I will post them all up in order.

 

[o hey tyler]

I'd strongly consider swapping out one of the photos in the triptych and putting in one where you can see her face. It would work soooooooooooooooooooooooo much better.

 

[vtf]

I just hought it was kinda funny that guy was taking a picture towards you. As part of a storybook is different, it might make more sense.
On my monitor they all appear to be lit the same.

 

[ababysean]

did you add a vignetting around the top one?
I notice the difference but not until you point it out and now it is all I can see lol but just don't say anything to the client.

Or if you can just crop it a tad tighter so the brightness of the trees fills the frame.

But I love storyboards like this, for several reasons, it gives meaning to the pictures. Just take each alone and while they are great pictures they could be easily passed over when the client is picking out photos, but now they see three or 4 together and think I need all 3 of these in my album!

I can't wait to see more!

 

[MohaimenK]

Sorry this is dark but I can't really do much PP over network. But here's the idea. I'll mess more with the picture on right to make brighter

 

[Tbini87]

Looking good. Did you shoot an BW or do you also have some in color? I would like to see some color just to get a feel for the people and venue in real life.

 

[Robin Usagani]

It would be nicer if your horizontal line is as thick as your vertical line or vice versa.

 

[gsgary]

He dosn't look very happy

 

[MohaimenK]

I have in color. Just give me some time so I can gather the chosen pictures (i'm almost done) to put them together in order then post selected ones in a "series".

The venue was nothing special. It was in the back of the apartment building. Although they had a nice gazebo with water path with fountains on one side. They only had about 30 people there. The reception was also held inside the building in their reception area which was a very small area.

He dosn't look very happy

Yeah he didn't smile/laugh much. But I like the way he's staring at her and watching her speak.