Not bad I would do something about those lights, Mask in your other exposures so they are not so blown out. Also adjust the yellows. The lights seem to be a yellow light just from the lighting I am seeing but, there is a bluish light reflection on the street???
Not bad. You could crop the two streetlights since there isn't that much happening at the left/right edges anyhow. Best thing would be to go back on a cloudy day.
One shot a few fstops more underexposed would have fixed the lights. This is great processing Barbarian. You really got it down now. The atmosphere and the building look spot on.
It's pretty much what the scene looked like, given the sodium lighting or whatever it was. Notice the interior lighting is pretty close to the way that looked, too. The "bluish" light on the street is from a traffic light.
And it would look a lot more like daylight, then. It might even look as interesting. But it wouldn't look the way I saw it, when I was leaving that night. And this does.