Stairs Shot - any good?

[DGMPhotography]

Hello there!

So this image here... I like it because it's a little different. It's not super sharp (low-light), but even if it was, do you think this composition would be any good? I don't feel strongly one way or the other..



Thanks!

 

[Vince.1551]

Her hips captured my attention more then her face

 

[DGMPhotography]

Her hips captured my attention more then her face

And that's a bad thing?

 

[Vince.1551]

And that's a bad thing?

LOL

 

[robbins.photo]

Ok, well if the question is "Is this stairs shot" any good, the answer would have to be no. I can't even see the stairs, I guess the girl is in the way. Lol. Composition wise it isn't bad.. maybe if you could add just a touch more to the bottom so it doesn't look like her left leg is being cut off at the knee, I think that's probably the only thing that really stands out to me from a composition standpoint, at least immediately.

 

[DanOstergren28 4]

I'm really not liking the light on this, and right now would say no. Perhaps with the right amount of editing it could be good.

 

[DGMPhotography]

I'm really not liking the light on this, and right now would say no. Perhaps with the right amount of editing it could be good.

What do you think should be edited?

 

[Tee]

Raise the exposure a third stop for starters.

 

[DGMPhotography]

How about now?

 

[Monday]

looking better, I agree with robbins where her bottom is cut off is a bit distracting to me

 

[Tee]

Second edit looks better. I think it's suffering from composition problems as mentioned above. Not terrible but not spectacular.