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My points, and many others, have not been addressed.Here are a few things I've noticed:
- I understand that you want to make money off of reviews. But, you need to make it more subtle. You specifically tell the reader that you're looking to profit off your review. After reading that, I'm no longer interested, and you've lost me as a reader. Seriously.
- Agree with @jaomul , you need an easy way for me to return to main review page. Don't count on users hitting their back button. If I get lost, I just close the window.
- You state that "No piece of gear is safe from my reviews," and yet you're only reviewing gear that you own. I very much doubt you'll own gear that would get a poor review from you. Why should I trust that you'll be providing unbiased reviews when you're only reviewing gear that you probably researched and determined was a best fit for you?
- This needs a lot of work before this goes live, IMO. This could easily be a couple week's worth of work. Before you really sink time into this, see if it's actually worth your time.
- Equipment isn't in alphabetical order. If you're planning to have lots of reviews, make it easy for viewers to find the equipment. If I have to search the site for more than a few seconds, I'm already gone as a reader. My mouse has a "back" button within half-an-inch from my thumb. I use it quite liberally when searching the web.
- It's clumsy to use and navigate. Sure, it works for a few items, but if you plan on having a good amount of items, it's very clumsy. Think drop-down list, or some way to sort by brand, or mount, or type, or something.
- Your section called "My Experience" has this stated: "This is the part where I talk about my own personal experience with the lens, in real life situations. If you're going to read any part of this review, let this section be it." Great... so, how is it going to work for me? You need to cater to the reader.
- I see all Nikon gear (except for the GoPro and the bags/filter). I use Olympus and Canon. Why am I coming to your site? If I want a review of only the equipment you own, I can get individual reviews on Amazon, B&H, and countless other sites. You need to have an in-depth review to keep me interested as a reader.
- You provide some tech specs, but then tell me to just look at someone else's site to view the full specs. By you telling me to click somewhere else, I'm already gone as a reader.
- If you're going to just list the specs, put them in a table. They're unreadable to me outside of a table.
- Your text needs to be much more professional, readable, and needs to keep me as a reader. For example, you say, "You can find this information anywhere on the Internet, so I'm just going to list the important stuff." First, yes, I can find it anywhere on the internet so maybe I'll go elsewhere, since you're not taking it seriously. Second, I don't see anything about battery life, which is pretty important to most people.
- Another example on text: "Feel free to peruse and then meet me down below for My Experience." You've got it all wrong. Why do you think that tech specs are always the last thing one reads on products? If I'm reading your site for the review, tech specs need to come LAST. In addition to listing them in a table, you could integrate the tech specs in your review, which would be much more helpful to me as a reader. "Oh, I didn't need to worry about battery life because I was able to use the camera for a full day of XX number of pictures before needing to be recharged." See, much more useful.
- Did you take the photos of the equipment? If not, I very much doubt Nikon would appreciate you making money off their photos.
While I appreciate your detailed feedback, half of your points are of things I've explained already and are moot points.
Alphabetical order is a good idea.
As for your comments on the review, it's unfinished. As I've said multiple times, I'm mostly looking for feedback on the layout right now.
As for the gear, as others have mentioned, I would like to try out equipment from all brands and budgets. Partnering with a camera shop would be ideal, but for now I'll review my own stuff and that can still help people who are interested in that gear.
Members on here spent time out of our day and gave you honest and helpful feedback regarding layout (and much more) only to be met with you actively choosing to disregard our feedback with a "still in draft" excuse.
If you don't want comments on an unfinished page, don't ask for feedback on an unfinished page. If and when you finish your review site, I imagine we'd still be willing to provide comments, assuming you're looking for honest feedback to incorporate into your finished product.