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[arfeliciano21]

My second car shoot. Let me know what you think. Full set on my flickr. Thanks!

Warehouse Sti 11 by arfeliciano21, on Flickr

Warehouse Sti 8 by arfeliciano21, on Flickr

Warehouse Sti 14 HDR by arfeliciano21, on Flickr

 

[camz]

Third one takes the cake for me. I'd add a little bit more of digital fill to get that car to brighten up though.

I'd do away with the first. The second has an appealing backdrop and an interesting reflection on the windshield. I'd crop a little close
to take away the overpowering pull of the shadow or edit it out otherwise.

Nice car.

 

[marmots]

i really like #3, but barely even noticed the car

 

[camz]

Yes symmetry of the structure in relevance and the texture of the bricks does alot for the composition. I would've placed a flash inside the compartment to illuminate the interiors of the vehicle and have distinction...one approach of many I suppose...

 

[Bossy]

Scratch them all and reshoot at a better hour. Your shadows are too harsh, and you need a filter to block those harsh reflections in the windows.

 

[rkhan]

#1 and #2 does look too bright.