string and rust

[crzyfotopeeple]

 

[KenC]

I like this sort of thing, but I really wish the metal handle weren't cut off. Otherwise the composition is good - just a little shift to the left.

 

[crzyfotopeeple]

 

[KenC]

Yeah, like that. I'd probably clone out a little of the rust that's along the left edge, but that's really not a big deal.

I like the way the shadow leads to those spots on the surface in the mid-lower right (or vice-versa).

 

[crzyfotopeeple]

Thanks for the critique.