Success?

[pbelarge]

I am a little old fashion in my taste, and I am sure it manifests itself in my taste of photography.


I like the last rendition, better than your original post, as it shows more depth and size of the parking structure, and is dark enough to exhibit the original feeling you were trying to set forth.
...remember this is solely my opinion.

 

[bentcountershaft]

Cool, thanks for the help. After seeing it I agree.

 

[syphlix]

ben,

it's not really to my taste... there just isn't anything in the frame to keep my attn.

that being said, if you think it's a success, then it is... don't forget that you're the ultimate judge... not others...