why include the sky in a portrait. in the 2nd one she is well exposed and the sky is barely visible....plus there is a speck that is blown on the tip of her nose
I was including the sky because there it looks really nice when you underexpose the sky and expose the person. There is a blown part on her nose because her face was shiny lol not because I played with the curves too much.
OP:
Use a flash, you will get better results with a strobe but you either need to be close to an outlet or have portable power which is hard to find these days. What time of day is the shoot at?
Not saying these pictures are good I'm just trying to demonstrate the difference a flash can make.